The key things that you missed were:
Not a smoot transition from tutorial to the menu.
It's way more complicated than your instructions say, for example, when moving, you can't bat nor when jumping.
It was very tough for me to play this game, so I'd recommend reviewing your code and just tweak out these little details, and you'll have a nice and interesting game.
I really like the overall idea of the game, but it lacks sound effects that are appropriate to the style, and also try to debug some stuff. For example, when you're asked to repair the buggy, you can press the repair button several times, and even if your buggy is repaired, it will still take away points, and if this button is continuously clicked, the number of credits will start increasing (with no effect whatsoever).
Keep up the good work, and I'm sure your next work will totally rock!
Feels like a demo or prototype...
I loved the idea of making a Flash Smash Bros game. You got the graphics, muxic and SFX right, but as far as gameplay goes, you should really iron out all the bugs because the controls and AI don't seem like they're ready for presentation yet.
I'm sure you can improve all of this and make an awesome comeback!
good graphix, addicting gameplay. It just needs a lil' bit of music. I just have a question. Did you use arrays for the level design or did you design the whole level as a movieclip? Just wanted to know because I have some ideas for some future games.
stylish graphics, simple yet addictive and fun. Keep 'em coming man.
Good game, but found a bug...
if you fall and keep on pressing the right key, the game will keep on scrolling until you let go of the key.
so good, so yummy, so delicious. At first I thought "oh, just some pictures, yay..." but then after a while, I got hooked, and was amazed by the graphics, the way the backgrounds and clothing, and pose emphasized each one of the characters. I also liked the music. It set the environment pretty well.
Congratulations on a extraordinary Flash.
Very good concept...
did you get the main part from the car game at CartoonSmart site? Because it looks pretty familiar, but with an interesting twist.
cartoon what? sorry i didn't do the graphics the other guy did
Good concept and graphics...
but I think the game lacked more exciting music, and a more accelerated pace, I know it's underwater, but still I kind of got bored when he walked and still no enemies on sight.
Keep up the good work!
Best things in life come in small sizes...
and in this case, small file size. I loved it, so simple and yet so mesmerizing. The objective is so catchy, that I just lost time, graphics complemented the game as well as the music. Keep up the good work. By the way, who's the song author?
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